SwagBot’s Comment on the 30 Second Words Ad-vehicle Prototype:
Great work. Keep it up. Here’s my pro’s and con’s of the ad.
1. First of all I like the sound of everything. It sounds really really pro. I think you should use a different tag at the end though, the whisper gets lost.
2. These need to be punchier and delivered a bit quicker and more energetically.
3. Also, there’s no antonym given with the definition. Seems like it weakens it a little in terms of educational value.
4. I love the reference to a website, this is cool.
Overall I think you are on the right track, I’d just like to see these get a bit tighter and closer to your original format.
Wow, everybody Loved the Antonyms. So maybe Antonyms will need to come back. The original format was conversational and informal. There has also been some discussion about whether or not these should refer to a website. Thanks for the comments!
